Persuasive writing Why I think school days should be shorter.
In my opinion I believe that school days should be shorter.
I think school days should be shorter because that means kids have more time to do what ever their parents let them and their little kid dreams
and I also believe that of because of why school days are long is the reason kids get angry at their parents to not go to school because of the length that school is and that's why I think school should be shorter
and third of all the reason why I think why school should be shorter is of the mostly every kid gets very tired at school so if we have shorter school days so that they go bed to rest and get ready for the next day
I therefore believe that should days should be shorter, so children have more time to be children.
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